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Outer space, The final frontier, is the next dream vacation for the rich and famous. Shockingly so this vacation is no longer impossible thanks to Virgin Galactic’s new commercial spaceship, Enterprise. Wealthy individuals will soon be able to experience the thrills of zero-gravity and take in the views that space has to offer. Although it would be an amazing experience, I feel that it would be destructive. It would be a waste of thousands of dollars, there wouldn't be many test runs before sending people out, and the tourists wouldn't be as prepared as NASA astronauts who train years to go up in space. All in all, until more is known about space, vacationing should be limited to on Earth locations.
Outer space, The final frontier, is the next dream vacation for the rich and famous. Shockingly so this vacation is no longer impossible thanks to Virgin Galactic’s new commercial spaceship, Enterprise. Wealthy individuals will soon be able to experience the thrills of zero-gravity and take in the views that space has to offer. Although it would be an amazing experience, I feel that it would be destructive. It would be a waste of thousands of dollars, there wouldn't be many test runs before sending people out, and the tourists wouldn't be as prepared as NASA astronauts who train years to go up in space. All in all, until more is known about space, vacationing should be limited to on Earth locations.
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To have the freedom of choice at schools is to most a set up for disaster due to the junk food influenced students. Instead of dictating what students can buy from vending machines, the schools should be offering healthier alternatives. For instance, instead of only selling candy bars, how about also vending parfaits? Not smothering the students allows them to keep their freedom, it introduces healthy alternatives, and provides structure. The authority given by freedom of choice will more often than not provide kids with knowledge to pick healthier snacks.
To have the freedom of choice at schools is to most a set up for disaster due to the junk food influenced students. Instead of dictating what students can buy from vending machines, the schools should be offering healthier alternatives. For instance, instead of only selling candy bars, how about also vending parfaits? Not smothering the students allows them to keep their freedom, it introduces healthy alternatives, and provides structure. The authority given by freedom of choice will more often than not provide kids with knowledge to pick healthier snacks.
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Nowadays, headline making suicides are becoming a norm of society. Most suicides are caused by bullying yet as a society punishment has not become drastic enough. Warnings and detentions are given out yet nothing changes. By creating more effective bully punishments we will cut down suicides, create better environments, and make a change. Bullying has been a problem for longer than it should have and the punishments should be treated as punishments for serious crimes.
Nowadays, headline making suicides are becoming a norm of society. Most suicides are caused by bullying yet as a society punishment has not become drastic enough. Warnings and detentions are given out yet nothing changes. By creating more effective bully punishments we will cut down suicides, create better environments, and make a change. Bullying has been a problem for longer than it should have and the punishments should be treated as punishments for serious crimes.